Palaya choru and Pizza
This story is very funny to show the love between a student and another girl who belongs to another caste. To him, she looks like pizza, for him, the lover is Pazhaya soru, Pacha Molaga, for the girl is able to compose and sing songs .The love episode after being separated from her is narrated by the student to his cousin and from the dialogue the reason being on the basis of caste is rejected by his father is clearly stated by the lover .
Comment:
Though short it seems to be very colloquially narrated.
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Thank u for the comment sir/ma’am.
It really helps to know what does the story seem lacking when particular things are left downplayed. Surely will try better one in future.
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Thank you for your review, either sir or madam… A motivating one. Will produce the output better next time.
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