I begged for more
With salted eye and breaking fine.
I cursed time
and my eyelids more;
And begged for a moment more,
But where goes my prays,
Gazing Lui constantly
This’s how Adonis captured Dawn?.
But the wind swiped away utterly,
Time the wheel shair handicapped me.
Well, the moment of ecstasy ended there!
And the notes of these are imprinted .
Long Lost.
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This poem “Long lost” depicts the angony of the poetess who being lost her eyesight then yearns, prays and begged to the God, but all ended up in vain as she was handicapped. The capturing of the dawn signifies either the lost of her eyesight or her own death… And, all these bitter happenings that she laments and frustrates was only to gain her eyesight before that moment ( death reaches her) but of no hope she finally imprinted these…. through her pen or in the soul of hers… A short amusing poem. Well crafted…
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TQ for your interpretation, it gave a new out look but for a time just focus on Adonis & D, you may get more. .
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The poem Long Lost is, though ambiguous like postmodernism in common, philosophical indeed. The body, with just departed soul, mourns its inability to open the eyelids is what I perceive. But yet the mentioning of Adonis traces deep into Greek Mythology to dig more related things as He spent one-third of his every year with Persephone, Aphrodite and on his own respectively.
It is a good-read👍👍 keep it up
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