Mosaic one could attract all
But she broke her own to make one,
Each piece to peaces they made.
Every colour from the rainbow she borrowed to create,
Moving with highness with weighting heart,
Her’s alone, she did break the stereotypes to her extent,
But lasting with happiness took the burden of names on forehead. .
Named Wings.
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A thought-provoking poem where the persona is a bird or indeed the face of herself who outburst her angst by becoming a full self only by pieces that longs for peaces and she broke all the stereotypes in order to stand unique from others …. a bit hard to decipher…
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Thankyou krishna, that’s great you got it . .
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A worrying heart,or so to say, a dismembered soul, which made its mosaic, gathering all the colours of the rainbow, but only to witness the broken piece of tile(as per assumption pertaining to mosaic) . The ongoing dismay of the poet is about the break of the tile, which is not the entire bunch, but only Her’s. With an unconventional array of words like ‘peaces’ and ‘weighting’, the poet tries to emphasize a certain pattern of the existing system. The very idea of mosaic is an evident authentication of the pattern, where the speaker alone is broken/ breaks free from the stereotype. The weighting factor is obviously her heart, which gives her a sense of pride ( in the context of the word high) . She takes all happiness at the cost of getting labelled or stigmatised. Though a short verse, the poem is encapsulated with feministic fervour and interestingly, a rare treatment of duality, which for the readers’ perspective, will appeal two dimensional : 1. The tone of the poem is so subtle that one can immediately identify it as a broken women’s distress, wherein, 2. the interesting part is its strong feministic appeal, which elevates the poem to substantiate the speaker’s ‘I don’t care what you feel’; ‘ I dont give a damn to your stereotypes’;’ Call me names, I don’t bother ‘ kind of attitude, which is so hidden and yet so visible. This ‘ fluttering wings’ that are named and many a times shamed, will eventually be on the records as the one very much famed. A Maya Angelou kind optimism…. Well said…
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Thankyou sir, for your thoughtful explanation, you got every corner meaning of it . It’s greatly encouraging . .
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