Reviews of the story contest : Indianness

Ammu

The second is about the efficient lawyer called Velan’s return to his native village after twenty five years. On the way his mind is engrossed in thought about the days when he and his sister were happy to play on the jasmine ground with his friends and the game common to all village kids and the time when his sister was likely to get defeated ,he would be ready to save her from the defeat and the cry she made without shedding tears for the barfi too came before his eyes.

Then the driver announces the place where he has to stop and the cry of his mother too brings before his eyes the love he had for his sister. Looking at the pic of his sister hanging on the wall makes him burst into tears and from his words the cruelty of getting married early is known and that too at the age of thirteen, death during delivery is painful to be known.
Such a leading advocate what did he do when the marriage had taken place and why he returned after the demise of his sister after twelve years seemed to be un believable.

Comment :

what is the use of his crying that he would have stopped? why he tries to make a scene.

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